My love.. does this sound right?

you will never find a girl that loves you as much as i do so you can give up trying. you may be conceited and jerky and have a big ego, but i fell in love with you. i fell in love with you the minute you smiled at me. and do you even know how much pain it feels to see you with HER. holding her hands and walking beside her to cles. do you truely understand how much this kills me inside. to know that i will never be her. nomatter how pretty or smart or funny i am, i will never measure up to HER. everyday i hold my head up high and plaster a fake little smile on my face and pretend that everything's okay. but it's not okay. every day i feel like crying, dying, wishing i never fell in love with u in the first place